Tuesday, October 20, 2015

AUTUMN: Theme and Variations

Theme:
"A Traveler's Meditation" (Amphion)

God's handiwork is all around:
Bright red leaves,
wheat in sheaves,
Fertile farms where flocks abound;
Shaded cows
chew and drowse;
Mountains' multi-colored dress;
Thunderclouds
draped in shrouds:
God's bounteous works are limitless.
~~
Variation I

"Highway 23 in Autumn" (Neville)

God's handiwork is all around:
in scarlet, yellow leaves
and golden wheat in sheaves.
Sun-burnished pasturelands abound;
leafy groves shading cows
that switch and chew and drowse.
God's goodness--in all life--profound.
~~

Variation II
"Autumn Song" (Pantoum)

God's handiwork is all around,
Magenta, scarlet, yellow leaves;
Sun-burnished pasturelands abound,
Cut, ripened wheat stands bronzed in sheaves.

Magenta, scarlet, yellow leaves,
Umbrella groves of sassafras,
Cut, ripened wheat stands bronzed in sheaves--
a visual banquet unsurpassed.

Umbrella groves of sassafras,
a camouflage for brindle cows,
(a visual banquet unsurpassed)
which nonchalantly chew and drowse.

Like Garland's fresh-shaved stubble, gold,
sun-burnished pasturelands abound,
and I sing with the oriole,
"God's handiwork is all around."
~~

Variation III
"An Autumn Minute" (Minute)

The autumn beauty's everywhere--
in fragrant air,
magenta leaves,
bronzed wheat in sheaves.
Sun-burnished pastures stubbled gold,
lone oriole,
umbrellaed groves
--bovine alcoves--
a visual banquet unsurpassed,
a rich repast.
All senses share
fall/s love affair.
~~

PL - from Variations - published 1994






3 comments:

  1. As enjoyable as the subject of your work. Thanks for sharing this.

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  2. Thank you, Pat. It's one of the things I like to do. . . write the same poem in many forms, a great exercise for any poet. Yvonne Nunn took me through these three forms in her online class. Faye Adams

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  3. Enjoyed them all. This morning, I found myself singing This Is My Father's World.

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