MODERN TANKA do not have to stick to the traditional 5-7-5-7-7 form if the image(s) can be seen in fewer syllables.
muffled radio
and hammering
at the nearby building site--
my outside coffee/news place
contaminated
May 8, 2012
~~
FOUND tanka
"The marathon . . .
a learning experience
that keeps on teaching . . ."
never enter another
without a post-race goal
- idea from Celia Storey, AD-G,
May 12. 2003
~~
small, 2-college town--
without PhD after
your name, you're no one
especially in churches
with large music ministries
[traditional form]
May 18, 1999, Arkadelphia
~~
bouquet of clover
privet and honeysuckle
plus dandelions
the strong scent
reminds me of Mother
May 12, 2010
~~
thumbing through GLAMOUR
in the Texaco station
waiting room
hurry fellows,
it's beginning to rain
May 18, 2006
~~
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c 2015, PL, dba lovepat press
Sunday, May 3, 2015
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